One more week left of school so I thought I would put a astory on...
"Get your bags out of the car please".
Says Mum.
''Yes I say.
I go to put my bags into my new room at our new house I notice something strange. My matress is shreded and the inside of it is all over the floor.
The radio turns on SCIFI starts to play.
I go and finish helping mum get the rest of the bags out of the car.
Blood is pouring out of my draw like a broken pipe. Now i'm really worried,I go to creep towards it and open the draw.
Now I know why the lady before us that lived here went missing.
What can I do?
There is a mysterious stench comming from underneth my bed,I lift up my blanket and an arm appears.
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"!!!!
I scream.
Hi - we are an amazing class of 27 West Coast kids who always set high goals for themselves!
Great writing Alyssa!!! It really really hooked me in!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood work alyssa but just remember to correct your spelling
ReplyDeleteYou guys all forgot full stops on comments.
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