Tuesday, 25 June 2013

cavan's volcanoes


The volcano spit’s it’s lava out like a cut artery. The volcano burt’s itself like an explosion.The volcano is as hot as a heat ray melting a snowman in the snow.The lava flow’s like a endless stream.the lava spirts out like wild fire.I run for my life as I fear it’s over for good.The lava burns you like a bbq. Melted rocks fly throw the air like fireworks. Volcanoes spit it’s lava like a heart pumping blood.The volcano throws it’s lava like it’s throwing up.
by Cavan Dyer

3 comments:

  1. I wrote this poem last year. Hope you like it.

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  2. nice caveman like the details

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  3. I like your poem Cavan but I still think you should have used something other than the volcano the volcano the volcano.......

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