Thursday, 20 June 2013

Dangerous Driver

                       Dangerous Driver

The day flew like an arrow for me.I saw the small crack in the canyon and asked a friend for help.I had a plan to make me famous,but it did not work out.Heres my plan.Get a ramp,get a buggy and get to the other side of  the canyon.I was nervous and I wanted my friend to do it.I reversed the buggy to the edge of the cliff and waited. READY,SET,GO!!! Yelled my friend Preston.I Sliced through the wind like a bullet, up the ramp and into the air.I felt like a free man but something made my heart sink.The ramp,it broke.The buggy was flying straight into the side of the canyon but out of nowhere a plane came right underneath him and lifted him up.He had made it to the other side of the canyon.As soon as he got to the other side the plane immediately blew up.His plan had worked.Soon postcards and e-mails were rolling in.A while later he had huge crowds around him.From then on he stayed happy for life.

                                             The End

3 comments:

  1. what a wonderful description it painted a piture in my mind.If your were in the car what would you do?

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    1. if i was in the car i would not do it because the ramp was broken

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  2. cool story like the titil.

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