Thursday, 27 June 2013

The unexpected journey part 2

Its 5 o'clock in the morning. 'I'm hungry' groaned Zac. Don't worry said Dan. Help will soon be on the way. I bet ya sam whitelock and all the other guys will be having fun on the dune buggy.''Its all my falt'' said cory jane,And mine said ma nonu. Then ma nonu saw a black helicopter drifting down closer and closer to the boat. This was there chance
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  1. Schkelia27 June 2013 at 14:09

    cool, can't wait till part 3 :)

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  2. Jack27 June 2013 at 14:14

    Check your punctuation next time

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    1. Unknown27 June 2013 at 21:03

      Jack I do agree with you. We are all enjoying reading the stories people are posting but we did just say yesterday that everyone needs to remember to check their fullstops and capital letters for proper nouns, (people, places) are correct before posting. Do you think you could make a sign to place above the computers for us? Thanks, Mrs Phelps

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    2. schkelia28 June 2013 at 12:12

      A sign would be a good idea.

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    3. judd4 July 2013 at 14:08

      Yes!

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  3. Preston28 June 2013 at 19:37

    I will check my punctuation next time

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  4. cavan2 July 2013 at 12:19

    I can't wait for part 3 and 4 and 5

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  5. judd4 July 2013 at 14:14

    And 6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,,15,16,17 and 18!!!!!!!

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  6. judd4 July 2013 at 14:17

    And 1920,21,9999999999999999999999999999 and the last one!

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    1. preston9 July 2013 at 08:40

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  7. Anonymous11 August 2014 at 13:40

    oh my fucking god judd

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