As I walk into my musty room to my left 5 big boxes towering over me like a skyscraper.To my right a polished wooden door. By the boxes a wonky wardrobe. In front of me a big blue bed like the Tardis. Old orange cars left to rust in the bowl of water. Some video games that haven’t been played in a decade. The wardrobe grins at me like a monster. Broken cd player that used to boom music out all day long. Leaving my room in horror I stop it’s time to go. That's my room
Author cavan dyer
Cavan - this is last year's writing! What changes would you make to it now do you think? You can do to design and edit post to do this. Mrs Phelps
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