The Sun & The Moon
The sun boils like a cauldron.
Waiting to burst.
The Moon is like an assassin.
To an astronaut.
The sun is like lava.
Shooting out melted rocks.
The Moon is like an outer space Antarctica.
Sucking out the warmth.
The sun is as round as a pregnant lady’s belly.
Ready to pop.
The moon is like Pacman.
Awaiting in the shadows
The sun and the moon are opposites yet they are both planets.
By Preston Sweney and Cavan Dyer
Ha such a funny poem do more
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ReplyDeleteyep we will do some more poems at friday free writing time
ReplyDeletehopefully we will do mars and saturn
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Great work Cave man
ReplyDeletewell done preston & cavan ..... hope to see more :)
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