Thursday, 13 June 2013

The Oak Tree From Hell by Cavan


The tree stares at me like a building’s windows.
It is as thin as Slenderman. 
It towers over me like I’m an ant.
I stand and look up it. 
It looks like an enchanted maze.
A bird tries to land, but bounces off like there is an invisible shield circling it.
The tree is hungry. 
A child tries to climb but get’s swallowed whole.
The tree was hungry. 
Poet: Cavan Dyer
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11 comments:

  1. cavan14 June 2013 at 18:55

    hope you like my poem. the real title is the oak tree from hell.

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    1. Mrs Phelps15 June 2013 at 16:33

      Hi Cavan - have titled your poem for you!

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  2. Arnie14 June 2013 at 20:14

    nice poem cavan:)

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    1. cavan15 June 2013 at 19:50

      thank you gibby. I will comment on your work:)

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  3. cavan's mum15 June 2013 at 19:41

    I like your poem Cavan.mum :)

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  4. Matthew19 June 2013 at 12:01

    CREEPY man but nice anyway (:

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  5. henry20 June 2013 at 10:17

    good work caveman AHHHHH HERE IT COMES!!!!!!

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    1. Matthew24 June 2013 at 12:09

      NOOO IT WILL EAT US ALL!!!!!!!

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  6. Joseph24 June 2013 at 14:09

    Your'e gonna give me NIGHTMARES!!!!!! Scary. Ah it's after me!!!

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  7. May26 June 2013 at 19:02

    Very good Cavan.Can't believe you made that up off your head.

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