Friday, 14 June 2013

Jack And Brayden's Roblox Story


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  1. brayden14 June 2013 at 14:55

    it is a good story i like it

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  2. Dean19 June 2013 at 11:55

    cool Jack and Brayden like the men.

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  3. cavan19 June 2013 at 12:17

    I should write a story about minecraft:(. since it's better

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  4. cameron19 June 2013 at 12:22

    can you add me in the next chapter like you were ok i am changing my guy soo add me plese

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  6. bradon19 June 2013 at 12:28

    ok i will add you next time it will be better you better look better

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    1. Jack26 June 2013 at 10:23

      Cameron, why did you put your name up as Brayden. besides its not spelt bradon its spelt Brayden

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  7. brayden19 June 2013 at 12:28

    ok we will

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    1. cameron19 June 2013 at 12:30

      will you add me brayden will you or not

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    2. Jack19 June 2013 at 12:49

      YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. schkelia19 June 2013 at 12:59

    Good Work, can't wait till you publish more of your story.
    Schkelia

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    1. brayden19 June 2013 at 13:10

      thank for thanks for the comment

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    2. Jack24 June 2013 at 14:17

      Why thank you for the Comment

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  9. cavan and jake20 June 2013 at 09:46

    it was kind of repetitive saying the user name a lot.you should work on complex sentences

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    1. brayden20 June 2013 at 10:09

      its ok saying them so they know who they are

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  10. cameron20 June 2013 at 10:09

    no way

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  11. Henry20 June 2013 at 10:10

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    1. jack and brayden20 June 2013 at 14:08

      ok we will it will be done soon

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  12. Unknown20 June 2013 at 11:14

    yes we are stop sending silly com

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  13. Jake21 June 2013 at 11:41

    Jack? When is Part 2 coming out in the reagent theatre? haha Jake

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    1. Jack24 June 2013 at 14:15

      Jake, did you have to say that?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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  14. brayden21 June 2013 at 12:04

    its coming out soon

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  15. Matthew24 June 2013 at 11:49

    Hey cool story man

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  16. cameron26 June 2013 at 13:53

    my guy is awsome074 so ad me on the next chapter. I will help you with the next chapter

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    1. jack*28 June 2013 at 12:22

      enough with the next chapter!!!!!!!!

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  17. Anonymous28 June 2013 at 12:22

    * not jack

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  18. Dean1 July 2013 at 11:03

    crepy

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  19. Dean1 July 2013 at 14:25

    why roblox!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Jack8 July 2013 at 09:28

      Whyyyyyyyy Minecraft Dean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  20. Schkelia2 July 2013 at 13:44

    Are you going to write the next part of the story because I really like what you have done so far.

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  21. Holly6 August 2013 at 08:37

    Wow that story is really cool Jack

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  22. Henry7 August 2013 at 10:21

    Come on already write part 2! You published it on Friday 14 June 2013 and now its 7th of august 2013 its been 3 months! d'you call that soon?!! Because I dont!!!

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  23. Jack And Brayden7 August 2013 at 10:30

    We Are Not going to write it ever again

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